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Poem - Stoning the Mirror

Posted: Thu Aug 28, 2014 12:00 am
by Sara V Schmidt
A poem Victor wrote in response to someone who didn't like hearing the truth about themselves - January 2011:

Stoning the Mirror

Mirror, mirror, on the wall,
Wherever did you get your gall?
I’m not guilty of such things at all!
Mirror, mirror, take a fall!


I have a different image in my mind,
Of myself that’s much more kind;
A finer person you’ll never find.
Surely, mirror, you are blind!


Mirror, mirror, full of lies,
What you show me, I despise;
What I see, my heart denies,
Things not fit for holy eyes!


Who holds this mirror before my face?
I find your judgment cruel and base.
Is your agenda my disgrace?
You need to learn and take your place.


I will now even the score;
I will escape what I abhor.
Crash goes the mirror to the floor,
A false impression to give no more.


Now I live but shattered dreams.
There is no longer peace, it seems,
Only eyes full of beams,
A state no decent being esteems.


Victor Hafichuk

Re: Poem - Stoning the Mirror

Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2014 2:23 am
by Marina Carnat
I like it a lot: simple and clear, but at the same time - profound!

Re: Poem - Stoning the Mirror

Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2014 11:49 pm
by Terri Cabreros
Wow...awesome poem. Reality

Re: Poem - Stoning the Mirror

Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2014 8:00 pm
by Joyce Wentworth
Yes, truth spoken!
Sure impossible to run from a mirror's reflection, as much as I've wanted to, and tried to, so many times. An eye-opener!
Joyce Wentworth

Re: Poem - Stoning the Mirror

Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2014 11:09 pm
by Simon Mwebaze
Yes, the reality of who I am and want to do. It also shows God's grace to me and all by keeping us from walking away (no free will) after seeing who we truly are in part.